[Waldo]

I'll be posting this on another forum or two so I apologize in advance if I seem repetitive, but the more input the better I believe? Yes.

Anyway, I'm about 3/4's of the way through with this one and as I work to finish, your input would be most appreciated. I plan on bringing out the details in the face, hands, and the body highlights. Along with that, adding more detail and color to the wings, but not to the point where they detract from the focal point I'm trying to keep established which is her face carried downward through her body. Once again, I know the lighting and it's sources are whacked, but any and all comments, criticisims, and suggestions would be most appreciated...



Cheers all.

[Basement bound]

Cute fairy. there are a few things that I see that I think could improve the image. One was that the image does have depth but because of the hue of the overall image is does contain a flatness. So I thought if one turned down the saturation of the background. Created a more powerful light source coming from the middle of the back. Added the corresponding light on her body. I think it makes it more dynamic. by the way I think the pose you have the character is great.

Here is mine.

[Icannon]

toes! are you going to make the wings transparent? why such a boring background? i think the shapes you have are great, but her wings look as if they're falling off. the right wing isn't aligned with the middle of her back and seems perpendicular to the left wing (which seems parallel to her). hope that wasn't confusing.

[Highfive]

True, her right arm seems to go through her wings.

The body looks great though, and the colouring's rich and vibrant. When it comes to add more detail, add most of it to the wings since they grab the eye the most.

[Waldo]

Thank you for the comments and suggestions and an excellent observation concerning her right arm and wing. Something I completely missed.

Back to work...