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Zekie member
Member # Joined: 15 Jun 2001 Posts: 110 Location: Lost Angels, Calipr0nia
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Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 11:05 pm |
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based on a girl I know.. I hope it came out aiites..
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Matt Elder member
Member # Joined: 15 Jan 2000 Posts: 641 Location: Sydney, NSW, Australia
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Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 11:56 pm |
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Very nice and stylised. I like the full shot of the dress. the top characters right hand cheek seems to be a little bit too defined and I don't think the left eye is really clear. There appears to be a swirl of lines that could be better if simplified. |
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ArMaDoN member
Member # Joined: 16 Sep 2000 Posts: 97 Location: Richards Bay, South Africa
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Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2001 2:45 am |
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very nice work Zekie,
you have very confident lines. the style is nice.. i like your approach.
- Like Matt said the cheek seems to be a little off on the top woman's face.
- on the same pic. look at how you have put the right ear high up and the left soo low. try and adjust that remember proportions. it's always good too look at real life. did u do that on purpose or did u forget.?
nicely done and go on your work is nice |
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edible snowman member
Member # Joined: 12 Sep 2000 Posts: 998
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Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2001 3:42 pm |
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i know its stylized but the legs seem kinda long to me |
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gekitsu member
Member # Joined: 25 Jun 2001 Posts: 239 Location: germany
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Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2001 2:24 pm |
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long legs aren't really bad, are they?
take a look at elena from street fighter 3: double impact or third strike, then you know long legs =)
i like the overall look of it. it's not too specialized in the features but still recognizeable. |
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ArtKeo member
Member # Joined: 29 Feb 2000 Posts: 115
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2001 1:25 am |
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Elena probably has problems driving a car though.How would those legs fit in the car under the stearing wheel?
I like the way you drew the eyes of the girl,Zekie. |
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