[chipie]

ok...Untoten. has no background yet. did it a while ago and not sure if i shall continue or just leave it this way, put it away.

[Pangbiro]

ok, nice pic, but she seems to be simply staring into the distance, she almost seems to be thinking "whats that?".
I hope I've interpretted this right but the guy is meant to be a vampire? if so, she needs to be looking like she can actually feel what he's doing, perhaps make her grip his coat.

[hethebar]

Intense contrast man, it adds so much drama!
I disagree with an earlier reply and say she looks perfectly in shock (some sort of supernatural shock). Having her grip his coat would look intense but it's only opinion whether or not her open or closed hands are more appropriate. If they remain open it looks like she's flung open her fingers with the shock. I imagine that the vampire's bite feels like ice on her neck and the blood draining leaves her feeling like she's jumped into an icy pond ...

/hethe

[chipie]

thanks for replying, means a lot, especially cause i'm new here and all.
yes, he's supposed to be a vampire. gripping the coat would be a good idea, but i don't think i'll go throught the mess erasing all that..hmm..or maybe i'll make a version, don't know. the look - i'm quite happy with her face expression - i wanted shock, and like frozen, or how you wanna call that..
hethebar - thanks also, for the compliments and comments. happy you think it's 'dramatic'