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PixHortHiT
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 Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2001 5:01 am |
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Hints, Comments, thoughts about this piece, created in paintshop pro 4.12!!  |
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Freddio
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| Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2001 6:01 am |
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wow, thats very cool indeed..
I really like it.
I feel you need to define the lower half of the body a little more..
maby some more work on the claws also..
apart from that.. looking very nice..  |
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Dezi
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| Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2001 7:03 am |
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| WOW!! I have NO crits!! That is sooo awesome!!!!!! |
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K-RuzH
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| Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2001 7:10 am |
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Hey, I really dig the face..
but there are some other things that can be improved.
It looks abit blurry, maybe abit to much use of the smudge tool?
His legs looks abit funny, and I think it would look better if you saw the other leg abit more.
Also his right hand seem to be missing 1 finger...
Overall pretty near work, keep it up |
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Matt Elder
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| Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2001 8:20 am |
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| Very, very nice... you do know that there are other colours than red (just messing with ya). I would have to agree that it is a bit blurry. The lower jaw, at the extreme left hand side has an edge that is too well defined and doesn't seem right. I guess it has more to do with the character but there upper body seems disportionality large to the lower half. I'm not sold on the pose as it seems like the creature is standing on its toes. The upper leg could use a little work as it doesn't seem consistant with most of the image. Just minor things really. |
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FireFry
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| Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2001 10:53 am |
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Pretty awesome looking. no crits from me
::continues staring:: |
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Pangbiro
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| Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2001 2:06 pm |
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::Lifts jaw off the floor::
Fantastic... Amazing...
the only minor crit I can possibly think of is that the arm that is the most distant, (it's right) possibly need to be darkerned to show that its that much further away...
Just slightly where the arm connects to the body. |
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Probotech
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| Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2001 3:20 pm |
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This reminds me of my first posted picture. A similar demon concept. Not very successfull i migth add.
Anyway, very cool this drawing. A bit undefined from the lower half down as ppl have mentioned. But defenetly a nice peice overall. |
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PixHortHiT
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| Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2001 7:28 am |
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Its kinda old, I�ve never come around to fix the rest of the body though..
And yes, its mostly done with smudgetool, the sketch for this piece was originally made in paintbrush during a fit of rage.. |
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LeChuck
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| Posted: Sat Oct 06, 2001 7:31 am |
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| You have won the Slybo seal of approval. |
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