[IodineSoup]

Still pretty early sketch, note the lack of clothing @_@. My mind sorta blanked out when I decided to sit down to think about her costume.

I'm probably the only person in my class that dares to draw a figure nude before adding clothes on top, much to the amusement of my peers, many a doodle has been ruined by drool. Due to that fact, it's pretty much a blessing that my school wasn't allowed to have nude models for life drawing classes.



Figure drawing hasn't been a strong point of mine, I'd be really glad if anyone would help me point up some mistakes or give some advice. It wouldn't hurt to give some suggestions about her costume too.
Danke.

[ October 03, 2001: Message edited by: IodineSoup ]

[The_Anarchist]

Well from one poor drawer to another...
You did an exelent job on the hair for the detail of this sketch. I really like it its somwhere between Anime and Reality.
The rest of the gril is realy to under developed for me to make any fair comments.
Above All keep trying!

[Petra Pan]

Body is nice - Hands need work.

PP

[FireFry]

Her head looks proportionate to the rest of her body except for the hands. They are way to big for that small body. As to her costume the shackles don't really fit with her wearing a bikini n' all. My suggestion would be to redraw them as bracelets if you want to stick to a bikini/beach theme which I really think is coming along well.

[IodineSoup]

Mmm, well thanks for alll the comments, though, she was suppose to be nude for the time being as I still have no idea what I would want her to be wearing. Guess I have to fix her hands, I have a really stupid habuit of drawing people with rather large hands.

[Affected]

I would work on the forms a little. Right now they're really simplified, the thighs and her torso are more like tubes than anything. Try to get a little variation there, from muscle overlaps, bone structure etc.