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Briareos · Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 1:08 am

I cant delete this, I made a mistake, this should be in Finished forum. Please move it moderator. How come we can't delete our posts.

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notic · Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 3:01 am

i cant belive no one has replied on this one

the clothes on both ot the girls look great
really nice cartoony feeling, nice color combinations

the ear on the first girl looks kinda big and thick at the "connecting point" to the head

the face and head on the second girl looks wierd though, escpecially the nose.

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Incubus · Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 4:34 am

Great style! I like that anime-cartoon-like look of these drawingings. Proportions, detail, colors and lighting (especially on the first one) are awesome.
As it was said before, the faces of both figures look a bit strange. Can�t really tell why. Maybe its the noses...

Anyway...Great work!

Petra Pan · Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 6:45 am

Supernice.
Especially the clothing.

PP

frostfyre · Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 7:20 am

Its so good seeing everyone's work again

Nice work! The top one has a real "world weary" warrior feel to it. The second one just screams out awkward kid. (maybe its the freckles) The texture on the kid's clothes are actually really interesting, its seems a bit different from other stuff I've seen of yours.

As for crits- as another poster mentioned, there's something funny with the face on #2- her eyes are shaped as to suggest that her skull is actually slightliy mis-shapen. The head is situated far enough back on the neck to make determining where the jaw begins difficult. Finally, #2's got her back bent an awful lot.

Laters-

Ahcri · Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 8:36 am

Hey, is the first picture of a girl in Final Fantasy 10?
You've done a great job painting their clothings, but about the first picture, I have to say that her mouth is kind of wide.

Briareos · Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 12:00 pm

Thanks, whats the deal with the noses. I dunno?

Briareos · Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 12:03 pm

Ahcri: No, who is the girl from Final Fantasy 10?

delovega2 · Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 2:47 pm

you have a GREAT eye for color... better then me so far anyway... keep it up, i love the pics.

Ahcri · Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 5:19 pm

Oh, I might be wrong, but I think she looks kind of like the girl on this wallpaper:
http://www.gameart.com/ahcri/wallpaper_final_fantasy_x_01.jpg

It was until now that I realized they are not that similar...

Briareos · Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2001 6:12 pm

Wow!! Nice pic!! I never seen that character, very cool

TweeK · Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 2:11 am

ehh boot fetish? I see a girl who just happens to wear boots

Nice work

Ian Jones · Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 5:08 am

Great pics. I also think your sense of colour is great.

The absence of lips, eyelashes and the weird noses seem to make them look a bit like kid heads. like a small boy or girl. Could be what you wanted but I like the more traditional sexy pin-up with beautiful heads.

The clothing, yes the boots!, are simply fantastic!

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Gothic Gerbil · Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 7:41 am

Love the design of the first one! The pants on the second one are really cool as well. Only thing that bothers me is a bit overdone on the freckles on the 2nd one. That's all!

Briareos · Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2001 9:15 am

More Freckles!!

hehe.

No one likes my noses. I was just trying to make em a little boyish.. tomboyish or whatever, not beauty queens (blech!)

Any ideas on how to make my characters in the future feminine but retain a down-to-earth look or whatever, and keep them young too ....?