[TweeK]

Hmm, anatomy problem
Actually I think it's nice until the part of the shoulders.
Anybody can correct this?

Thanx
jeff

[Anthony]

Hey Jeff
Yah, the shoulders/arms are buggered. ^_^ You need to move her right should/arm down/left about a bit(more left than down), and her left should/arm down/right a bit. That should help immensely. The BG's a texture or something right? You oughta paint something there instead. Keep it up, paint in a higher resolution so that you can detail her face, and try to pick your light sources. Right now it looks like there's a huge light behind her, and yet she's fully lit! As it says in the 36 Ways to Achieve Bad Lighting(I think that's the title), one was "Make your fill light strong enough to eliminate the shadow from the key...then add another key to kill the fill's shadow...and then another fill-keep going until there are no shadows." I think ya get his point. ;]