[Zekie]

Still working with the colors.. Just comment if it is anygood.

[TweeK]

Looks really nice, this is a good start for the coloring. You can add more complexity later anywayz.
I like the mangaish style in it. Maybe an idea to put it on a background.

great start
Jeff

[J-D Leon]

looking really tight.
try to contrast the picture.
and her right breast just look too unnatural.

you have to obserb.

[gekitsu]

nice

the only thing that looks a little bit strange is her pose...
i don't know what to do to be caught in such a pose. when first seeing the head i thought, she'd be lying on a bed or something like that. then i scrolled down and saw her standing.

but i really like the style, especcially her face.

[Twice]

I see you are getting bether at color. Realy nice. I just love going throug your drawings at your homepage. something I do every now and then.

[InsaneSpaghetti]

Something wrong with the head - I think the forehead should have more volume to it or something. Really hard to say, knowing it's Manga-ish.

[damppuppy]

Great Art. And great style. I'm curious though what software are you using and what brush are using for the line art. Her abs seem to be a bit stretched vertically, but that may be intentional exaggeration. And her right breast may seem unatural because It's unlined or the shading near it is too light. The face looks really good, but the position of her hair line and the way her bang fall in front are conflicting. I'm thinking that's why her face seems a bit flat. Again great work.