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FatPenguin
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 Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2001 9:33 am |
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When i become the unquestionned dictator of a small island nation i want a personal jazz band who will play at my request. And the musicians will be small enough to juggle. Yes.
I plan to draw a quartet of these people. I realize there are lots of mistakes in the images, but if anything looks particularly stupid, let me know.
if the images don't load, drag to adress bar blah blah etc.
edit: geocities is no good
[ August 07, 2001: Message edited by: FatPenguin ] |
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Pigeon
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| Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2001 10:14 am |
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My biggest concern is with the double bass picture. It doesn't seem very fluid or dynamic, things which I generally want to see in a musical piece. Also the proportions on your bass seem a little off, which would be fine if you accented something other then the rendering, for example movement, and manipulated the proportions to emphasize that.
I wouldn't mind seeing a wider range of colors and values either. They seem a little washed out right now, and just a couple hints of vibrant colors or extreme values might help bring it to life.
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