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redbutted ape · Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2001 2:55 pm

These are some head sketches I was working on. I'm having trouble getting the mouth on the 3/4 view to read right with the stupid tusk!

kaylon · Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2001 5:34 pm

Very nice renderings..

I see what ya mean about his Tusk...solution...?

His tusk is to close to the center of his lips..and nose..A tusk of that size..and possition would be at the far end of his mouth as it is on his right side..it would be almost touching his left cheek bone..as it is..it's touching his left Nostril..see what I mean..Make the tusk larger..and place it behind the upper lip section...

Hope that helps a little.

Kay.

KOryH · Posted: Fri Aug 03, 2001 7:12 pm

I really thought about the 3d aspects of the jaw ans stuff. I gave him a protuding jaw and underbite. I think that helped with the structure. It still could be fixed a bit but it seems to be a good start.
BTW I love your drawing. The lighting is very realistic, impressive!

After looking at MY drawing again, I think that the tusks might be a little wide, but you get the idea. PS do you know anyone at Blizzard?

[ August 03, 2001: Message edited by: KOryH ]

Laemtao · Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2001 2:13 am

Firstly, Mr.Redbutt...err Ape. (erm y not just go with Baboon?)

Dang nice rendering. Got great shading.. and i can see and understand have your predicament about the 3/4 view. But whoah.. Koryh i think has hit the nail on the solution!

First Cincinimo now erm.. Mr Ape. KOryh, U seem like a doctor doing housecalls haha... u come in.. u fix and u leave..
HAts off to u KOryh.

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Mo

redbutted ape · Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2001 11:43 pm

Help, I'm getting funky... Hey, those are great comments! I really hated that tusk and it just shows what every crusty, white haired drawing teacher you ever had says, "watch your form! Tone does not make a drawing.". Pissed the frogs out of me because I couldn't get that structure to work and then there's all this pencil on top of it! Whadda mess. Thanks again.

jcFIG · Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 6:39 am

WOW, thats some great drawing there. It's very tonal. Later.

[ August 05, 2001: Message edited by: jcFIG ]

MoleculeMan · Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 11:26 pm

i love the drawing, could you post the fixed version? Also another thing, you might wanna take off the address/somuchpersonalinfo on the paper. I am not saying anything bad is gonna happen or what, just its better to be on the safe side. I don't think we need great artist's getting into anything bad.

jcFIG · Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 7:48 pm

Yeah, people in the Orange County area are going to start crank calling your ass. LOL