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Briareos · Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 2:17 am

Don't know why im posting, some numbnut will probably say "thats great, but her anatomy is a little off"... bah.

I am aware of the problems with the arms, any suggestions on how to fix them would be good.

http://www.sijun.com/cgi-bin/ultimatebb.cgi?ubb=get_topic&f=5&t=004271

In case your wondering about the gender remark.

[ August 05, 2001: Message edited by: Briareos ]

Vesuvius · Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 4:24 am

thats great, but her anatomy is a little off

NukleoN · Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 12:12 pm

That's anatomy, but her numbnuts are a little off. I want a pony.

Breakerboy2 · Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 1:03 pm

From what I can see here, the arms look fine.

Her right eye (farthest away) looks like it's too far off on the other side of her head, and I might make her ear a little bit smaller and more feminine. Maybe thicker eyelashes?

I really like your line quality and your take on the human form. Nice muted colors too.

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Briareos · Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 3:45 pm

I was being sarcastic, its a guy.... duh.

Breakerboy2 · Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 3:54 pm

Well, that's a relief.

My comment on the farthest eye still stands. It's like his head's not wide enough on the other side of his nose for an eye socket to fit. That eye also feels a little to low on the skull.

[ August 05, 2001: Message edited by: Breakerboy2 ]

Briareos · Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 4:39 pm

So bring it up and closer to the nose?

[read that link on the bottom about the gender thing.. hehehe I got really pissed]

Breakerboy2 · Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 5:21 pm

This is what I meant...

Either one would work, but I think the one on the left is a little more consistent with your style. The right one would be a little more anatomically correct, I think, but also looks more generic.

Briareos · Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2001 5:52 pm

Ahh! The visual helps, I see what you mean now. I think its more of a perpective thing then an anatomy thing maybe? Anyway that helps alot, thnx man!

MeatyCheesyBoy · Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 5:24 am

I think that the problem with the arms for me is that its pretty hard for me to judge their length right now. The one on the left (his right) seems too short up top and too long below the elbow but its hard to tell because of how the bend is and because there isn't anything to really indicate where his waist is.

Briareos · Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2001 8:25 am

Yeah, I think the arms are too short... not sure how to fix his right arm.. maybe drop his elbow down and straighten out his fore-arm... I dunno I will play with it.. what do you think?