[Luke_de_Sade]

Here's a character I'm working on for the Drow Meets Vampire yet untitled comic I plan on releasing. His name is Black Aria--sure, not very original, but what can I say? Danzig rules!--and he's a Berserker Demon. I need crits, please, and comments. I don't know where to go from here. Maybe him grabbing some poor chap by the neck or something, squeezing the life out of him. By the way, he's like 14 feet tall or something.

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[Mezoic]

Very nice sketch so far, the only issue I am seeing is that you have not really planned out his final pose, which seems to have resulted in a strange position for him. It's really hard to fit him into doing something with his arms out like that.

Something that to comes to my mind would for him to be pointing at something, with a weapon in his other hard.

[Luke_de_Sade]

I originally planned him to be holding someone by the face, but then I was like "Uh, face? Nah, the neck is better." So I think he will be doing that.

And yeah, his other hand will be holding his huge freaking sword (10 feet long).

[kaylon]

Id probably try to get more movement within the pose...he's very static...it's a problame I have myself at times (lots of times ).

Maybe, As you have not rendered the legs much...twist his torso more..towards the field of view..I feel this alone may make it more Dynamic.

Kay.

[Luke_de_Sade]

OK, phase two of the Berserker Demon. Comments? Crits?

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[Laemtao]

Luke!! nice.. i love his head shoulders Chest Torso .. but i think his forearms should be a tad longer..

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[Ragnarok]

I think the anatomy and proportions are great for this carachter. And the original idea of grabbing someone from the face would look very good imo