[Svanur]

Been playing with this for so long I want to puke, yet I am determined to finish it one way or another.

http://www.simnet.is/hangar/eldar2.jpg

Criticism would be appreciated, especially on what I could have done better with the lighting and so on. I am also stumped with how to paint the rock he is standing on that I want to pull out my hair.

[kaylon]

Not a bad start..You need to do something about his left arm and hand on the wall..something wrong there..also..where the hell are his knees hehe..half way down his shins .

Maybe also give a little more shape to his helmet and possibly add a spirit stone to the front of his helm..you know what I mean.

And..maybe deepen his Eye sockes...not so flat looking..

Kay.

[Svanur]

I agree about the left hand. It seems as if it's too thin or something. I should define the kneecap better, what you are seeing is just his boots which don't go that far up.

I also agree about the eyesockets, seems like a future kk clan member than an eldar.
Should have used some eldar reference when I drew this.

Thanks for the input. It helped to see some of the mistakes I made. Been looking at that pic for so long that I am turning blind