TatianaStarchevsky
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 Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 12:42 am |
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There's obviously alot of work left to do. First question- are her eyes too big? Second question- what's up with her mouth? If you put your hand over her mouth you'll see that the rest of her suddenly looks alot better. What do I fix on the mouth(and also, should it be bigger?). I might just redraw the mouth altogether.
When this is finished, she's going to have her lips sewn shut. Anyone know where I can find a reference photo for something like that?
Ok, sorry if I'm asking too many questions. But I originally intended for her gaze to be much more haunting. What should I do to achieve that, whether this time or next time? And FINALLY, should I leave her eyebrows that color or make them dark?
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Joe Bount
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Location: France
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| Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2001 2:44 am |
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Hi!
Well, I thikn it's a good start but there's a few problems :
1� her eyes are too distant ; you should have exactly the place to put one eye between the two other.
2� the face must be divided in three equal parts : the part with the mouth is too small
3� Look on this forum, I have seen tutorial somewhere to draw nice mouthes
Nice eyes BTW
Joey :�) |
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