[InsaneSpaghetti]

Geez, I am an attention freak.


I see a lot of anime influence.
I plan to color both in pencil and digitally.

[ July 29, 2001: Message edited by: InsaneSpaghetti ]

[ July 29, 2001: Message edited by: InsaneSpaghetti ]

[InsaneSpaghetti]

As usual, no replies, but I'll remain silent. Here's a pencil-shaded version though.

[DarkBlade]

Okay, when I saw left/right in the post, I mean the viewer's left/right.

For the most part, her body's lookin good. I really like the way you've done her underarm and chest.

The left point on her chin is a bit too low, unless she simply has that misshappen of a chin.

Her hair looks good, could have a tad more body but not everyone's does.

You need a shadow to the left of her nose. The light would be casting it, and even with anime styled pics that shadow is very important in defining the nose. (Often that's the majority of what IS defining the nose.)

The underside of her palm, that's just below her pinkie and ring finger needs to be raised/indented more to show the proper shape of her hand. Looks a little strange at the moment. Also, where you have that line in her palm, you need to put the correct shadow in there too.

Given the way you've got your light source set up (and I like the way you do), the shadow should be on the underside of her right forarm, not the top of it.

Another bit with her face: You need to extend her eyebrows a bit more to the sides. The thinness of them is logical, but the width is not. You also need to put lashes out to the top outer sides of the eyes. Look at both anime and real people, the lashes are there.

Hope that helps