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T Lui
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 Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2001 4:32 pm |
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Just a character sketch of two characters I have in mind, the requisite bishuoen long-haired pretty boy baddy and the cold-blooded mercenary lady. Don't they make a cute couple? Aww... did I mention I love Vagrant Story and Akihiko Yoshida's style? 
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EviLToYLeT
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| Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2001 9:55 pm |
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| what can i say....... really cool. But.. the only thing that bothers me is that wriggly knife. hard to tell if some things are foreshortened or not. |
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Vgta
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| Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2001 11:17 pm |
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Hey awesome line art, just a few things with anatomy.
The foreground figures left arm looks odd, like its bending the wrong way.
His neck looks really elongated, maybe bring the head down a bit. or it could just be the way the armor contours to his neck.
The figure in the background, her left hand seems a little small.
Love the amount of detail in both figures, can't wait to see it colored.
Oh also, hehe, try and shorten her sword. having it go off the page breaks the compostion and makes the picture split in two, as opposed to the figures flowing from one to the other.
[ July 27, 2001: Message edited by: Vgta ] |
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