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Hjeldnes
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 Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 7:32 am |
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well..its not finished and I suppose the arm is too long..  Comments/crits? I'm mostly into 3d but I'm finally done with the project, so can draw a little again. Whee!
(in case it doesnt work)
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herbie
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| Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 7:57 am |
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| nice. it's a good start, but i think it could use a bit more contrast between de background and her fleshcolor. Now she kinda fades in. |
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Twice
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| Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 10:42 am |
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| nice to see norwegian people posting. Not to much of them. Anyway, the pic is nice, but I love the drawings on your home page. Some of them are just awsome! |
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Hjeldnes
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| Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 2:06 pm |
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Ah, doh..I didn't bother to check the url, figured it was ok..I'm really clever eh..
anyway, thanks for the comment. the background isnt there yet..not quite sure what to put in I just started drawing something without much planning..
Drawings on my site, quite old stuff, but I spent a lot more time on it...I've grown a bit too impatient, a bad habit.
Herbie: I don't mind at all. |
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MoleculeMan
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| Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 6:07 pm |
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| looks perty good! My critique is It seems like the dress is too puffy, because it looks like she gets deceptively fat near the bottom, while her "top" looks fairly skinny. |
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Awetopsy
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| Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 11:05 pm |
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i kinna see it..  |
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herbie
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| Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 11:26 pm |
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For those who can't see it. I put it on my server. guess you don't mind ?
the link you provided refers to http://http://... so that doesn't work either. |
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InsaneSpaghetti
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| Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 7:58 am |
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DANG!!!
Your b/w stuff on the site is AMAZING, dude!
J000!
http://www.3dluvr.com/lapskaus/
I hope you don't mind me posting it.
Everyone, I urge you to check it out! |
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Matt Elder
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| Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 4:20 pm |
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| A nice image that does seem a little blurry around the edges. I think you need some sharp edges and that will go along way to fixing that problem. A few highlights on the black dress wouldn't go astray as at the moment you have a very dark character on a very light background and the detail seems a little lacking. |
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Hjeldnes
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| Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2001 10:17 am |
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Molecule: well, I wanted the dress to be a bit puffy on top, but I could have done it better, the dress was a bit too quick..
insanespaghetti:no problem, and thanks. I mostly draw with pencil.
Matt Elder: I know I know, its very blurry, I was going to finish this but grew tired of it...so it'll join the list of unfinished projects..:/ |
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