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Zekie · Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 10:57 am

Just a scribble i am workin on. LOL. oh well, need to work on more.. but hopefully it turns out nice..

Dryfire · Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 12:14 pm

nice, hot tomaly!

Zekie · Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 12:25 pm

Would you believe me that is is neither Paintr nor Photoshop? It's true.. I didnt do this on Painter not Photoshop. I used this thing called Open Canvas. Very small program but powerful. But anyhow, what does it matter. Drawing is a drawing.

Briareos · Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 3:11 pm

Wow your skin is looking really good! Your improving alot! I like the idea, the armor looks like it will be fun to color. The only thing I see wrong is her neck/head look shifted to the left to much, I think they should be shited to the right more, do you know what I'm saying?

[ July 25, 2001: Message edited by: Briareos ]

Motorfish · Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 3:21 pm

She's very cute! I like this image as it is now...it has a nice monochromatic quality to it.

EviLToYLeT · Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 11:08 pm

looks great so far..... i really dig the face. but...before you go any further with the coloring.. please oh please determine the background and setting she's in. for example, sitting on a log? river bank? messing with spells? etc. etc.

if done properly.... it should turn out very nice. cheers!

Fat Assasin · Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 11:16 pm

Wow, I really like the drawing, and the coloring so far is good. I can tell you know what you're doing. Good suggestion for putting her in a setting, it would really bring the drawing to life.

One crit: the hair looks a little plain to me. Not that it's bad, it's just... disappointing after seeing how cool the rest of her is. Maybe a headband of some sort, or just add some more personality in hair. That's all.

Garry Lacey · Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 11:33 pm

Hey you painted over the lines! you cant do that! you cant paint over the lines!!

Looks extremely good so far btw. For me I`d drop the colour altogether, the power of the line speaks for itself and says all it needs to say. Such nice lines! I think the hair looks just fine too.

KOryH · Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 11:47 pm

I think the overall feel is great. However there are a few drawing/anatomy issues... the neck and head seem to be off center, the hands are a little large and make her look like a guy in drag, and the feet seem to be oriented in a strange way, especially her left one. Very minor things. Oh, she could also do with some more hip, wider that is.
Mostly just personal preference issues so take any suggestions with a grain of salt.

Keep up the fantastic drawings!!!

Razalex · junior member Member # Joined: 23 Jul 2001 Posts: 2

Nice drawing so far. I like it, good pose.

Open Canvas is great, Noco (Noco's site)does some wonderful things with it too.

Svanur · Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2001 2:27 am

Seems like Anime style is running amok here

Nice pic and the face gives a good character. But like KOryH mentioned she could use some more flesh in the torso, she seems a bit anorexic. On the other hand it looks good.

patrick · Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2001 11:32 pm

Thats lookin real cool, kind of reminds me of the old Naughty Knight series about anime style girl night that did a lot of "seriously nasty" deeds.
Your coloring looks nice so far, would like to see how you apply the different shades some day.