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vegeta�ONAC
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 9:29 pm     Reply with quote
please critique. its for a splash page on the internet. its still in the works...
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Relyc
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 9:39 pm     Reply with quote
Here is your image:



Looks good, seems a bit bland to me though, not enough colour variation.
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vegeta�ONAC
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 1:31 am     Reply with quote
grrr ur comment made me mad!!!! nah im just playin lol thanks for yur comment and puttin my work up. im kinda new to placin art n forums. -_-'
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digismack
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 25, 2001 1:50 am     Reply with quote
if you could smoothen out the figure, using airbrushing techniques and the lines not be as rough.. this could turn out very nicely. also the text is barely legible. nice work mang.
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vegeta�ONAC
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 26, 2001 3:59 am     Reply with quote
i finally finished this piece its up in my portfolio on the last page check it out hope ya like it
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