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herbie
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 Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2001 9:10 pm |
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Hi guys,
I gave up on my last drawing.. (why is it that i almost never finish anything..?)
I started with my favourite subject:...girls 
any crits/comments?
thanx in advance
Sander |
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J Bradford
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| Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2001 9:22 pm |
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| Good work man keep it up. The perspective on the hand seems to be a little off - as if it's facing towards the viewer too much. Her face and body could use more contrast. Are you using a reference? If so please post that as well. |
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herbie
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| Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2001 9:29 pm |
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I always have trouble with hands.
here's the pic I used as a reference.
he...what's wrong with taking her shirt of |
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Steven Stahlberg
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| Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2001 10:07 pm |
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I've been really rude and painted over your image without asking you first, I sincerely hope you don't mind. I like your image, it's a good start, I just think it needs a few tweaks here and there, the biggest being the position of the breasts.
Steven
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herbie
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| Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2001 6:32 am |
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Oooh...
Thanx for the feed back! Thats'why i posted it....to learn!
I like it! I was having trouble positioning the breasts. They look much better the way you did it.
�'ll keep on trying |
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herbie
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| Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2001 2:05 pm |
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ok, update
I tried to put more contrast on her face and body. I also gave her a breast job.
how's the anatomy now? 
btw steve> Thanx for your help. I also took a look at your site. Are you the guy from webbie??? great work! |
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Dryfire
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| Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2001 6:53 pm |
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| COOL hot naked chicks are awesome, your pic is great dude |
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Frost
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| Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2001 9:26 pm |
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| Forget simple nudity. More hardcore pron please. (kidding). Steven did a great job commenting on this. |
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herbie
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| Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2001 2:29 pm |
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UPDATE!!!
I don't have much time on hands, so I have to work with little steps at a time..
I colored her pants and put a "kinda like a fence" behind her to lean on.
I pretty satisfied with the pants. I think practice really is the best way to learn . Thank you guys for letting me look at your pictures for reference.
well....here it is:
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