[Loevis]

this is a image i have been working on, im very much newbie with art and stuff. Still any kind of oppinions is welcome, especialy those touching improvments of those parts I have done and suggestions on the parts I have not



cheers, Stefan.

[M_shady]

looks like you're getting on a good road there.

the drawing of the figure though seems a bit uneasy for me. how bout flipping the artwork like horizontally, and see if there's any mistake.

best not to use automatic gradients too much if it's a painting, and not a graphic design.

well shit, i gotta go. dinner. hope you dont mind my comments. laterz

[Loevis]

Thanks for you comment, even through its not such a big deal for you.
Those words of wisdom might be worth a lot when one gets stuck at some strange part of the image.

I will post a new version soon...

cheers /Stefan

[MoleculeMan]

this is coming along very nicely. My only comments are on the arms. The right forearm's perspective seems to be a little off. Maybe its the shading. That and the fingers on the hands aren't long enough i think.

[M_shady]

hey, feel compell to come back to this post again. well please, don't take it personally. i was really in a hurry. so my comment seems a bit rash.
i think you are moving along just fine. but don't let these words feed your ego too much. i know some ppl here tends to have that characteristic.
my opinion of the pluses of this image is that your understanding of the volume, and color. I grew up with comic art. it's all flat color and bold line work. but now i moved away from that.
having a good drawing underneath the paints is a good idea. i am sure you know that.
there is not much else for me to say now. i think i too can learn alot if i were to do a paint over.
hope u dont mind, but i am a student myself. i often let my friends crit my work. it doesn't always take a pro to crit a piece. Just a few honest comments can tell me that i have alot to improve.

laterz. excuse my bad grammar.