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jasonN
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 Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2001 5:08 pm |
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That's the pic. It's pissing me off a lot. I need tips, anything, to help me. Your fresh eyes will be a great help. I initially wanted to actually get a piece done, but I don't know if I can persevere with it.
And if you're wondering, he's a character from chinese history.
Thanks again |
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iface
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| Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2001 5:22 pm |
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hey man! thats preety good!
i don't know where have you got stuck... it seems right.. the only thing you have to do is to refine and add detail to the piece..
try to add more colors, without fear! (undelete rules), blues, green and reds to the clothes, more skin tones... that should make the image funnier to you to work with..
good luck! and keep on it! |
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burn0ut
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| Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2001 5:53 pm |
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| oh god thats bad ass... i like it how it is yo, imho |
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Ahcri
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| Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2001 6:05 pm |
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| Yeah, it looks good as it is. But I thought his face was red. |
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JiMSouL
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| Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2001 6:32 pm |
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Prolly if you got the rest of the image up to the detail level that you have on the face...
I know it sounds like ur pretty strung out with how its gone but if you stick it out and get the tone and shading as smooth as you have on the face the pic will rock =)
(not that its bad how it is lol) |
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frostfyre
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| Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2001 7:23 pm |
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Sweet! Only thing I've got is to say that the highlights look as though they are supposed to blend in to the lightsource behind, but that only tends to happen with the sun. Make that backlight bringhter, or add some contrast to the edge of the shoulders, and you'll have a little more of that "solid" quality to the rendering, I think.
Very nice pic! |
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jasonN
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| Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2001 11:42 pm |
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iface: Thanks. Yeah the colours are getting very plain, I'll try to get it going better
burnout: Thank you! 
Ahcri: hehe, yeah it was red in the beginning but then I got carried away trying to get the skin tones. I'll fix it up
JiMSouL: Yeah I think I need to take a break for a bit and come back to it.
frostfyre: I'll see what I can do. The shoulder really was troubling me. Thanks again everyone |
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DRAGooN of deranged
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| Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2001 4:40 am |
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| aaaahhhh!! sango fighters!! *drools* |
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Freddio
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| Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2001 5:57 am |
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I dont know what to say..
Your a talented dude thats for sure..
If you going for realism, Id make the head bigger also define his legs just a tad more...
UbER sweet man
be sure to refine it heaps and this will be very very cool indeed.. |
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robust
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| Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2001 6:35 pm |
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| I really like the face )) |
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