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Dan3d member
Member # Joined: 05 Jun 2001 Posts: 62 Location: Voorhees, New Jersey
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2001 6:00 am |
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Hi All,
My son loves sea animals and also robotic things. His favorite see animal is the killer whale. So, I decided to make a gift for him and make a mechanical orca. Here is the sketch and the work in progress:
This is the initial sketch done in PS
This is the beginning stages of coloring
This is a close-up of the head
I still have a lot of cleaning up to do and a lot of reworking, so be gentle on me . In any case, crits and comments are welcome! |
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Eric Pommer member
Member # Joined: 08 Feb 2001 Posts: 134 Location: Toronto, Canada
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2001 6:37 am |
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This looks very cool. Only one crit jumps out at me, and that is that the tail looks crooked. I think the right hand fluke should be a little smaller to create perspective, or it should point more horizontally. |
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Dan3d member
Member # Joined: 05 Jun 2001 Posts: 62 Location: Voorhees, New Jersey
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2001 8:11 am |
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I noticed that some of the perspective is lost (especially on the tail) because the underside has not be painted yet. As a result, the tail portion looks almost like its "bent" wrong or something. Based on the drawing (where the tail looks right ... at least to me ), I think this will straighten itself out once completed.
Thanks for the comments!
BTW - I have a long way to go on this one (water reflections, a background, a chrome-likeunderside, etc.) |
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Duracel member
Member # Joined: 08 Mar 2001 Posts: 910 Location: Germany - near Minster
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2001 10:18 am |
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It reminds me of the Reaver in StarCraft(by Blizzard Entertainment)
Oh, Yep it looks very well.
Ah, i don't know, if the choice of color is really the best.. :& somethin disturbs me.. perhaps its the expected BLACK of an Orc.
[ July 14, 2001: Message edited by: Duracel ] |
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Probotech member
Member # Joined: 25 May 2001 Posts: 149 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2001 11:49 pm |
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Wow!
Cyber-animals are my favorite!
Great work.
Only one crit, more detail, more pipes and gearwork and tech stuff.  |
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