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patrick
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 Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2001 7:10 am |
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Geez, I finally work up a good sketch and SIJUN had to go crash or whatever it did. I've been twitching for over a week wanting to post this for feedback. Its a sketch of Thrud, the daughter of Thor. It started out as a naked chick, but eveolved into the final version, I also had time to try to colorize it (Sucks I know), but I am just a novice still.
Comments and crits welcome.
BTW, if anyone wants to color it on their own, I would be proud to see the results, maybe I can learn from them.
[ July 12, 2001: Message edited by: patrick ] |
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Joe Bount
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| Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2001 12:02 pm |
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Hi !
I really like your pic, but there's a problem of perspective with the left arm's piece of armor : it seems to have the same dimentions as the right one. Maybee you should try to add more shadows to the colored version
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black_fish
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| Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2001 12:25 pm |
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She looked better naked.
Work on the face. |
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M_shady
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| Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2001 11:49 pm |
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er... just one thing. i dont wanna upset you, but please fix up her face. looks to guy-ish. nuf said for me.  |
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patrick
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| Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2001 5:41 am |
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Blackfish & M_Shady: Thanks for the comments, I guess I need to hone my feminine facial skills....
I'm not sure what you mean about the armour, Joe, can you be a little more clear?
Thanks for the comments again. I appreciate all the help I can get. |
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