Sijun Forums :: View topic - So if I say there's a couple of naked chicks..would you come

Vgta · Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2001 5:08 am

Okay, here are two drawings that I am working on.
I did them both last night and I need some help with the anatomy and perspective.
The first one I am not too pleased with the face and I will be re-working it. The second one I just can't seem to get this particular form just right. Please help out.

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Vgta · Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2001 9:32 am

and as you can see there are no chickens either.

Hippie · Posted: Tue Jun 26, 2001 9:41 am

Not here becuase you said you have naked chicks. LOL

Ok, let me see if I can write what I'm thinking and have it make sense.
Your first image needs more work. Not on anything in particular, just more to look at before I can offer any crits. I can't see what she is doing with the creature. Is she fighting it, holding it, riding it???? You get my point I hope. So add some more to it so it is a little clearer what is going on. As for the creature, I like what you have so far.

Now the second figure just looks too stiff. The torso needs to be more fluid and graceful. Try doing some quick gesture drawings to really get the feel of the movement. Work from a gesture into a more finished piece and try to keep it loose.

Hope this helps, looking forward to seeing what that first image is all about.

Keep us updated dude.

Gryphon · Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2001 6:41 am

I can't tell what's going on with the first one either... but I do have a few recommendations for the second. She needs a heel on her left foot, wider hips, and a smaller chin area/ higher jawbone - fix those and it'll doubtless be a nifty piece. I like the movement in that ribbon already...