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zeno80
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 Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2001 10:42 pm |
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First off sorry about the terrible scanning. Ive been doing this piece while studying for my Chinese exams. Finally finished the four main figures a couple of days ago. I really want to get these figures perfect before i start on the background. So please tell me what you think and please let me know if you spot any thing awkward with the figures  Thanx in advance.
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marky
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| Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 6:40 am |
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Some of its quite good - I like the drawing on the figure on the left of the pic.
Emmm .. the guy on the right looks like he's playing with himself - just thought I'd mention it!
The composition isn't helped by the guy sitting down obscuring the other ones leg. The foreshortening on him too, needs to be looked at.
Got potential though |
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zeno80
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| Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 2:20 pm |
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| Thanks for the crit marky. heh it really does look like hes playing wiith himslef, it'll be clear that he's holding a spraycan in the final version... hopefully. Yeah the foreshortening was bothering me too. can anyone pinpoint where ive stuffed it? c'mon people give me some crits. |
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Dr.Squirley
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| Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 3:35 pm |
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why are portriaing japanese like that?
just wondering |
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Sparks
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| Posted: Mon Jun 25, 2001 9:27 pm |
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| I haven't been able to place my finger on what it is about this image until now... it looks like something I would have drawn! Really, it's a lot like my style with the folds on the clothes and everything. Anyways, I like it, except that guy is definitely whippin something out of his pants, and as you said the guy in the front is not forshortened correctly. His lower leg extends too far, and his foots a bit too big. Also, the ankle's prominence and place makes it looks like the heel when first looked at, so you may want to move it down closer to the shoe and make it more subtle |
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