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Dragon82
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 11, 2001 1:57 pm     Reply with quote
I�ll put some text into it (over the screen and on the buttons)



please crit
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Anthony
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2001 9:43 pm     Reply with quote
Let's see. Right now the "fire" is more like an aura. It's a TV straight out of DragonBallZ! You need a background, even if it's just dynamic streaks. The pieces of glass don't look like they're flying from the TV screen itself. You need to think more about your colors, get some cleaner shading in there, and make it more realistic.
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