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toast! · Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 9:39 am

think it s time to get some crits; it s still quite rought but i hope the main shapes are ok

I haven t any idea how to model realistic hair ; i would like to stay out of plugins ; if someone knows about a good tutorial, please let me know

Toasty

digink · Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 9:51 am

The overall face looks good but I dont like the ears.. they dont really look like ears..

TekK · Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 2:39 pm

well, like digink said, the ears don't look right at all... i think maybe the rims need to come out a little more (out away from the head)... aside from that, she's a little buck-toothed... :P overall though, she's kinda cute...

teck

Briareos · Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 3:22 pm

Nice image!

Only thing is shes got some teef on her.. heh. And the lips are too smooth. Throw some lighting on her and post her again.

toast! · Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 5:01 pm

thanks for the comments people;

i ve changed her look a bit ; this version remember me Monica seles (which is not a good thing

)

here is she with black hair :

well she looks a bit depressed :/

and here is a punk version , hehe

Please tell me what you think ( wich one you prefer , or what things i could change or melt )

see you
Toasty

edible snowman · member Member # Joined: 12 Sep 2000 Posts: 998

i think the first face with longer hair would look better.

Anthony · Posted: Sun Jun 10, 2001 9:23 pm

You need to give her some meat around her mouth. Right now it's as though she has no gums or jaw. Otherwise looks OK. You need to redo the skin texture though, she looks like she's made of felt or something. :]

Andy`Ba · member Member # Joined: 20 Jan 2001 Posts: 98

I agree with Anthony. You need some flesh around the mouth. Or you can pull the lip corners a bit inside.

Sorry for my English i hope you understood what I meant.

Vgta · Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2001 5:59 am

Looking really good, here are a few pointers.
The ears look to be too far back, it might be the render though. Skin textures still need to be worked on. Remember flaws, no one has perfect skin and if they do, well it was probably photoshop done.

Refer to Bill Fleming, this guy has some awesome books on everything 3d also if you can find it take a look into this book. http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/ASIN/1576102742/qid=992267820/sr=1-1/ref=sc_b_1/104-3298838-4917519
Great source for info and knowledge.

frostfyre · Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2001 7:53 am

Nice stuff. I agree with the others, the first image is the best do far. The 3rd image looks as though her eyebrows are actually recessed?

Can't wait to see the finish!

toast! · Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2001 8:01 am

wow , thanks guys for the useful comments ; i will try to tweak it a little this evening

thought, by tweaking more and more i think i ve lost the original skin texture and global shape of the face

The previous versions are here : http://toast.planet-d.net/3d/newvisage

i don t catch the comments on the mouth

; I guess i spent to much time on it... where exactly does she need more meat

?

bye people

Toasty

Kjetil Nystuen · Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2001 1:44 pm

Toasty, nice to see that you are constantly improving, and progressing.

What kind of software package did you use?

Hmm.. more meat... Take a look at the first pictures. The teeth are sticking out too much. The lips are nice, but it looks like the flesh around the mouth is very thin. You see mouths like this on anorechtic (is this spelled right?) people. Try model some more details around the mouth, and I'm sure you'll see the problem. Use some reference pictures, and stay away from extremely skinny brides

Well done indeed!!

.kjeitl