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AgentNT
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 Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2001 8:55 pm |
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This was done for a school project, really fast, but i like to go back and work on it.
I know the biggest mistakes.
Any crit and comments welcome.
if you can't see the pic, just copy the url and paste it in the address bar.
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geoman2k
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Location: Indiana
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| Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2001 9:56 pm |
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not bad... the directions of the light are wrong in some places tho... the beams of light are coming down at one angle, and the shadow from the door is going the other. also, i can see the inside of the door.... wich means there has to be some light reflecting onto it, wich means that the ground where the shadow is probably shouldn't be such a dark black.
not a bad pic, just need to work on you're lighting a bit. |
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Nortlov869
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| Posted: Fri Jun 08, 2001 10:22 am |
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| I think you need to work on the perspective in the garden, it looks like a garden painted on someone's wall(sorry). Other than that it look cool. |
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