[AoD]

My web server is down, as well as the free one I use to host images, so I'm stuck with *gasp* Homestead



The only thing I can see wrong with it right now is that you can't really tell that he has a sword behind him. However, I accept this little flaw, and so I ask for only comments/crits regarding technique and composition. I'll make sure not to omit such an important detail next go around =D

[ June 01, 2001: Message edited by: AoD ]

[AoD]

C'mon, it's my first post ever, and I need some crits here. I'm only just starting this Photoshop thing, and I could use some help. So, what do ya say, eh? =D

[Dryfire]

Hmmm i'd tone down some of the dark shadows on the front of his chest... it will make the shirt whiter and give him smaller titties ;-)

[TremorX]

The only real crit I have is that it seems like the skin of the arms and neck is overlapping the shirt. The shirt looks like it's supposed to be loose farther down, but tight around the chest and stuff, so it sort of seems inconsistant. I'd say to loosen the shirt up all around, especially through the chest. Give it more folds and texture.

As for the skin, try giving it some softer tones instead of such hard lines. Try giving the hair more texture, too. After that, try to use that light source you have behind him to brighten things up a bit.

Good start, though!