Sijun Forums :: View topic - My hero... big boobies

Dryfire · Posted: Thu May 24, 2001 6:15 pm

yeah, i need a lot of help with this one, I am looking for some help on the umm chest section and shading on the legs, yeah i know i have a lot of problems with lighting but i'll smooth it out later, all comments/suggestions are welcomed.

yeah, this is a remake of an older pic... i did this from my memory of the old one

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Bjorn · Posted: Wed May 30, 2001 6:15 pm

I think your biggest problem is that you've drawn the chest-muscles (pectoralis major) independently from the arms. They link to the shoulder around the Deltoid.

Check your anatomy and how the chest-arm junction works, and you'll see that fixing that will very much help your pic.

Da bjorn

Dryfire · Posted: Wed May 30, 2001 6:32 pm

Thanks man, i'll try and fix that right away :-) Pitchshifter kicks ass

Dryfire · Posted: Wed May 30, 2001 6:53 pm

hmm heres a quick update...just showing how much free time i have

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geoman2k · Posted: Wed May 30, 2001 8:03 pm

look at the eyes for a couple of seconds, and you tell me whats wrong with them

Bishop_Six · Posted: Wed May 30, 2001 10:58 pm

geoman2k: lol

Dryfire · Posted: Thu May 31, 2001 12:31 pm

nothing is wrong with the eyes ;-) i'm kinda mixing spawn's eyes withthe traditional spidey's.... one is supposed to be larger ;-)

TremorX · Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2001 5:02 am

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Originally posted by Dryfire:
nothing is wrong with the eyes ;-) i'm kinda mixing spawn's eyes withthe traditional spidey's.... one is supposed to be larger ;-)

While that's a good idea, there's a reason for doing that style. It's sort of like super-deformation or exaggeration. The reason you'd make one eye bigger is to stress that one is much closer to the camera/viewer than the other. It's perfectly acceptable, especially in comic-style art, to draw the nearer eye three or four times as large as the far one.

The problem in your image is that the far eye is about 50% larger than the near eye. The direction you have the head turned in implies that his left eye is nearer, yet it appears smaller.

That's the problem - not that they're out of proportion or that there's anything wrong with that style, but that the reason behind the style isn't there.

That's the only real problem I see, and it was the first that I noticed when I looked at it. Try flipping the eyes around - make the near one bigger (closer) than the other, and it'll look fine.