[Twincruiser]

Here is another babe pic I made.
I think this one is better than the other.

Hope you like it

Pencils by: Michel (17)

[patrick]

Nice overall feel to the pic, but her right arm looks broken and her ribs look deformed, almost as if there is a huge gap between bones. Nice face and hair though, good detaling.

[Dryfire]

Thats one hot pic, i agree with the above critiques though... mabye think a little bit about the waist width in proportion to her shoulders... i think thier supposed to be the same but its kinda hard to tell from this angle.. keep on it!

[Bjorn]

You've definitely got the idea here...

Lemme see if I can refine the above comments a bit, 'cause they're quite right.

your minor problem is the upper chest. Either the ribcage sticks out too much at the front, or the back with backmuscles is too "straight".

Your biggest problem is the right (viewer's left) arm, because you've linked the biceps & triceps just to the shoulder/deltoid muscle, in stead of also to the rib cage. In this angle, the Triceps (back-upper-arm muscle) should seem to come form the rib cage, namely the armpit...your armpit seems independent from the body, hence the "broken" look.

Maybe when I'm more awake I'll try to show you in a pic what I mean. *S*

But keep at it man, I like the style you're developing. *SS*

Da bjorn

[Awetopsy]

hope this helps.

[Twincruiser]

Thanks guys!!!

Your advice is really excellent!!!!