[TOBYw0NG]

ok, been working on for about 1 night....

http;//www.freespeech.org/sneak/house.jpg

whats it need....

thanks

toby

[TOBYw0NG]

uhhh.... sorry i'm dumb
http://www.freespeech.org/sneak/house.jpg

[Frost]

Critiques:

That little house doesn't seem to be resting on the same plane as the ground. I think you should also consider that the light is coming from the sky (which is bouncing sky-colored light from all angles) and an unseen moon (which is acting like a directional light [...light from the sun bouncing off the moon]), and make sure that it lights the ground and grass appropriately. I find that the current levels make the grass seem white in color or so... just a little too bright.

Also with the grass patches, one can notice that you copy pasted the same one all over, which is a dead giveaway and doesn't help with the image. (They also seem to measure 6' to 10' in height compared to the house).

What is that ray of light coming from the sky over the house?

frost.

[ May 21, 2001: Message edited by: Frost ]

[s3ph]

Maybe add some direction to the smoke as the grassy patches seem to be blowing northwards? (am i right)
plus as frost said that grass takes your eyes away from the main scene house/sky
scale them down and give each something unique to break the pattern up.

Is the light supposed to be breaking through some clouds? if so then add some more detail to the sky clouds darkness etc

Trees look abit stuck on too

but apart from the above it sets a nice mood and looks nice