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Twincruiser · Posted: Sat May 19, 2001 11:36 pm

What you all think?

Pencils by: Michel (17)

Ko · Posted: Sun May 20, 2001 12:12 am

[non-constructive comment deleted]

Ko

[ May 20, 2001: Message edited by: Ko ]

Twincruiser · Posted: Sun May 20, 2001 1:46 am

I modified the drawing a bit. Hope its better now. You have to realize I was just practising and I agree i am not so good at drawing women (yet). I am no Michael Turner, you know. So next time, please don't be so rude when you are giving critiques and be a little more mindful.

Ko · Posted: Sun May 20, 2001 2:03 am

OK!, OK!

Here's a ten second fix of the boobs...
They don't look quite so "glued on" now.

Get my point?

The general anatomy of the pic is a bit wacky... broad shoulders compared to the hip and so on, but I guess that it's the comic style that you are goin' for...

Ko

Twincruiser · Posted: Sun May 20, 2001 2:20 am

thanks, I get it now!!

dogfood · Posted: Sun May 20, 2001 7:01 am

You have some very nice features here, notably the hair, but there are a couple points you might want to work on. The proportions do look a bit out of whack and it might start with the size of the head. You should look for Bridgeman's Drawing from Life, which has a lot of good advice on poses. I'd say that the hands really stand out. They seem overly "meaty" and in odd positions. There is a lovely feel to the drawing, however, with a nice face. Also, if you haven't done so already, look for Adam Hughes' site.

burn0ut · Posted: Sun May 20, 2001 10:00 am

Michael Turner is bunk, all he does is copy magazines..

Ctrl+Z · Posted: Mon May 21, 2001 8:41 am

hey would it be cool if i could color her?

Twincruiser · Posted: Mon May 21, 2001 9:04 am

Sure, be my guest.