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Shaded
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PostPosted: Fri May 18, 2001 8:32 pm     Reply with quote


Im stuck. Dono where to go with the 'leather' jacket.
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PostPosted: Fri May 18, 2001 11:01 pm     Reply with quote
Looking pretty good and I like the sketchy style. I'd say dont do much more except maybe some gestural coloring. I dunno if this is something that you wanna take the time to fix, but the face is at the wrong perspective. The right (his right) chin is sagging.
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PostPosted: Sat May 19, 2001 2:34 pm     Reply with quote
Thenks. What about lighting and environment?
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PostPosted: Sat May 19, 2001 5:38 pm     Reply with quote
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Originally posted by Shaded:
Thenks. What about lighting and environment?


This is Max Payne right? Well, how about having him at midnight, no moon or stars, under a street lamp, in a street corner, tall buildings all around him. Perhaps, have a Police station door, behind him.

Perhaps a bit of light fog to accentuate the scene?
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PostPosted: Sat May 19, 2001 8:02 pm     Reply with quote
I think Max Payne looks more like that IMHO:
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PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2001 4:37 am     Reply with quote
Frost: ROFL
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PostPosted: Sun May 20, 2001 9:40 am     Reply with quote
Hehe.

Yeh, that expression he always seems to have on worries me.
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