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Rag
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 Posted: Fri May 11, 2001 10:44 pm |
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Hey Synj,
Do you mind taking a look at this anim and tell me whatcha think? Simple story..guy gets awakened, falls over shit, looks outside..sees nothing and returns to bed. I know it's simple but my first. Can ya help me out with it?
Thanks,
Perry 
Address would help I bet.
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aneurysm
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| Posted: Sat May 12, 2001 2:44 pm |
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| It's all sounds, barely any animation. And the considering the sounds you used are recycled too... |
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| Posted: Sat May 12, 2001 2:54 pm |
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| Well, I'd help ya, but I'm not Synj, so I guess I'm useless, maybe next time! *crosses fingers* |
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Rag
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| Posted: Sat May 12, 2001 3:17 pm |
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I know it's simple but not a bad start I don't guess, maybe I'm wrong.  The recycled sounds were used because the end is just the reverse of the start.
I'd love your advice scoop, I like synj's animation and he was the only one I thought that could really point out some flaws or better ideas. Any advice would be good though. Heck, the plumber could probably point out a few things. |
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synj
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| Posted: Sat May 12, 2001 8:41 pm |
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Rag,
hi there hehe thanks
Well, it's interesting but I think you should pause it when the door is open for a few seconds to add suspense. Then nothing happening and him going back to bed would probably add some humor I think. Keep it up, never stop! WEeee |
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