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Ilias
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 Posted: Thu May 10, 2001 3:27 pm |
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I posted this a month ago, and some people told me that it looked really flat which is true. So if you have the time  and you don't have anything else to do can you give it a try and make it look better.
Thanks guys
chastity
umm if the link isn't working (which isn't) you now what to do http://www.geocities.com/hydrogen2o/Chastity2.JPG
oh joy...copy/paste
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Bjorn
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| Posted: Thu May 10, 2001 4:53 pm |
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I actually think it looks pretty good...
Just one thing: The right shoulder (for the viewer) seems...odd. It doesn't seem to connect normally to the torso to me. (I think it might be the "bump" on the right side).
Maybe you wanna look at that again?
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waylon
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| Posted: Thu May 10, 2001 7:27 pm |
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| You may want to go back and work on the proportions a bit. I've got the source pic here, and you're a little bit off in a couple places - most notably, her chest is kind of lopsided, her shoulder blade is sticking out a little too far, the center line of her stomach is a little off-center (which is making it look sunken), and her left arm, near the elbow, is too skinny. Otherwise you DID do a good job with the coloring, and she looks like she has a lot of depth. Just take a little extra time to get the proportions correct with your initial sketch and the end result will look a lot better. |
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