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fazedesign
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 Posted: Sat May 05, 2001 1:40 am |
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Gimme some crit 
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G Man
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| Posted: Sat May 05, 2001 8:58 am |
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are you trying o give us nightmares!! 
I think you should keep working on it, more angles of it etc. may help you get the perspective of it exact, because my eye is not forgiving the nose for some reason. Like the mouth though, overall pretty good.
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fazedesign
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| Posted: Sun May 06, 2001 2:56 am |
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| yeh the nose is my least favourite part, but its that big on purpose, whatever it is isn't human. I think it needs more depth or something |
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Daydreamer
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| Posted: Mon May 07, 2001 2:31 am |
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gosh....it looks helluva lot like the mad hatter from american gees alice minus the hat + the goggles....its that pic that shows up when u wanna end the game and he asks
"running away, are we ? y/n"....
just my impression 
PS:http://www.alice.trinitee.net/images/backgrounds/fan/10wall800f.jpg
PPS: Likeliness isnt THAT great, sorry for that, just reminded me strongly of it when ifirst saw it...greeetz
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patrick
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| Posted: Mon May 07, 2001 9:08 am |
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| reminds me of the Mole from the early Fantastic 4 Comics. |
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fazedesign
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| Posted: Mon May 07, 2001 8:01 pm |
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i think subconciously i would have taken the size of the nose from that pic, cause i have got pissed off with the loading times in alice and quite out alot heh. Definately wasn't on purpose tho
never read any fantastic 4 comics either, im not big into comics really, altho alot of the art is shit hot (i especially like the spawn special edition things covers)
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nepaltnf
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| Posted: Tue May 08, 2001 8:55 pm |
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Hey!
Looking at your pic..you might want to add a little more detail and depth to the side of goggles. Adding some more shadows and whatnot...i like the rest of it..the nose is kind of surreal. the goggles were the only thing that stood out to me as kind of unnatural,
good luck!
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