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Zilch
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PostPosted: Fri May 04, 2001 11:01 pm     Reply with quote
Project: sYn background
Time: ~1hr increments daily
Period: However long it takes me to get what I want

Criticism is TOTALLY open, I'm very open to any ideas or things you don't like It's how I learn. SHOOT!

Day 1: http://www.brentroad.com/photos/Zilch/fullsize/7332.jpg
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Zilch
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PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2001 10:45 am     Reply with quote
Day 2: http://www.brentroad.com/photos/Zilch/fullsize/5726.jpg
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PuckDewd
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PostPosted: Sun May 06, 2001 3:07 am     Reply with quote
Dig the first one better than the second. Need to do something about the typography though, shouldn't have to work like that to make out what it says.
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Zilch
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PostPosted: Sun May 06, 2001 1:25 pm     Reply with quote
Ya, I totally agree about the typography.. but this is far from done, that's just there because I did it early.. it won't be the focus of text

Just out of curiousity, what makes the first better than the second so far?
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Zilch
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PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2001 5:47 pm     Reply with quote
Day 3:
(I went on a side track for today because I was feeling leet )
http://www.brentroad.com/photos/Zilch/fullsize/9220.jpg
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smalls
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PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2001 9:10 pm     Reply with quote
dude zilch you suck soooo bad@!!!!@#!@#!@#@!#!@#!#@!@#!@#!@#!@

jk... anyway.. that is way cool.. i still am not very good at photoshop.. so i give you props

-poo<-----thats my signature
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stneil777
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PostPosted: Mon May 07, 2001 11:15 pm     Reply with quote
well the main thing about the first one that rocked was the top right how you could see the skeleton structure all that light dodge stuff is to much.
Just my oppenion on the matter, but hey everyone thinks i suck
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