[Rossimo]

This is part work in progress, part 'not good enough to be in the finished forum.' I just want opinions mainly on the logo I made, the sketches were just for fun, you can still tell me what you think of them though





Thankee

[xXxPZxXx]

I like it and think it looks nice but I had trouble reading it at first. Maybe Its just me but the letters being so blocky are hard to make out so close together.

[SushiMaster]

Yeah the logo is a bit hard to read... maybe if you fill out the letters with some sort of texture it will be easier...

Daniel

[Rossimo]

I would do that, but it is going to be put on t-shirts, and it can only be one color. That is why it is so simple. Any ideas on how to make the letters easier to read while also keeping with one color and simplicity? Thanks.

[Matt Elder]

same comment, legibility, can't read it. Couple of considerations, the line thickness isn't enough. The main problem at the moment is that everything appears as squares and there is little to differentiate between them. You also have a couple of characters which are not the 'norm' and require extra effort to work out what they are. Try thickening the letter outline and maybe spacing the letters a little. Even inverting might help (black on white instead of white on black).