[edgoodburger]

this is my first fully drawn pic using painter. And also my first painted one so i could use some ideas for background or comments that might help in the coloring part of the process!

[Nilrem]

the face expression is awesome, everything is greta my only suggestion is to some how make the eye closest to u seem more 3d it just for some reson seems flat. . .

other than that a great piece so far!

[edgoodburger]

thx once i get on the pic agian ill fix that. thanks for noticing i thought so to. i still need some way of making a background that matches it so its far from the finish line.if u find anything about the armor or hair let me know

[Brainswitch]

I like it, I've never seen the dragonball z style colored like that before. My only problem is that the chin seems be really lopsided on the right half.

[ April 28, 2001: Message edited by: Brainswitch ]

[Wyatt Turner]

I like it, very buff looking dude. But yeah that eye looks a little flat. you could put a darker ring around the blue iris and move your highlight more centered, just a round white dot should do. yours ssems to bleed into the white of the eye.

I like his facial expression. the chin looks fine to me, its stylized.

Not sure about the background. you could just put a greyish blue blurry image in there. it might pull the character in the forground more.

Well I like it.. Keep em comming :-)

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