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blurry_6 junior member
Member # Joined: 14 Jan 2001 Posts: 18 Location: Mill Creek, WA, USA
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2001 11:39 pm |
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Had a chance to screw around with the legs, and joints, etc this evening. Still gotta figure out a cooler texture - not real happy with the one I slapped on there,...maybe something matte-finished? Anyway, I think the design's kinda cool. Let me know your thoughts.
[This message has been edited by blurry_6 (edited April 12, 2001).] |
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roundeye member
Member # Joined: 21 Mar 2001 Posts: 1059 Location: toronto
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2001 12:28 am |
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dude, thats perfect! youre done! if u want more texture, try adding some chipped paint or scratches. or maybe try a matte white/ aluminum. dunno. its really late.... that rules btw. |
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S4Sb member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2001 Posts: 803 Location: near Hamburg (Germany) | Registered: Mar 2000
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2001 2:40 am |
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Yeah, I agree with roundeye. It's great! Looks like Liquid! coloured it |
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hipmix member
Member # Joined: 06 Mar 2001 Posts: 83 Location: montreal Canada
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sacrelicious member
Member # Joined: 27 Oct 2000 Posts: 1072 Location: Isla Vista, CA
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2001 10:53 am |
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Looks good (like I said before), but I think you should clean up the black bits and sharpen the lines, it seems a little blurry right now.
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blurry_6 junior member
Member # Joined: 14 Jan 2001 Posts: 18 Location: Mill Creek, WA, USA
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2001 2:29 pm |
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You're right Sacrelicious,...it's lookin' pretty dirty in regard to the line work. I just scaned in my pencil sketch, through it in raw into its own channel and started doodling with the color. I'm debating whether to take the time to do a tight lineart version (gotta find my 'ol #7 brushes,...not to mention the bottle of Higgins, Black Magic) or just futz with what's there. I think I've communicated the gist of my design, but yeah,...you're right,...it could be a lot better.
In any case, I'll probably continue to screw around with it. Thanks for your input. |
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