Sijun Forums :: View topic - pleeeease help me out? (same pic as earlier)

roundeye · Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2001 2:52 pm

[edit] thanx all! its done i think. its at the bottom if u wanna see...

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edible snowman · member Member # Joined: 12 Sep 2000 Posts: 998

to tell you the truth, i dont really see anything wrong with you right foot. her stance is a little awkward because her knees are bent in, but its certainly possible to stand that way. the only thing that might be really slightly off, that i can see, is maybe turning the left knee just a tiny bit. maybe you're seeing something i'm not though.

Dude · member Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2001 Posts: 144

Well first of all is her right leg a little off the ground and her toe dipping down a touch because if it isn't I think that her right foot doesn't appear to be on the same ground plane as the other foot, so if it is meant to be on the ground that is the problem that I see

roundeye · Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2001 4:21 pm

thanx guys, youre totally right. and her right heel should be lower. as well as the whole foot. cus the camera is like straight on, wrong angle...
edible, whats wrong with the shoe is i cant seem to get the lines right, in the blank area. thats all, very frustrating... thanx again.

Dude · member Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2001 Posts: 144

well I'm sure somebody else will say something of more use, but for now the only suggestion that I have is to make a quick 3d version of it to view from all angles or just cut out a piece of paper in the shape of that piece of material on top that's curved, stick it on one of your shoes and look at it from the front...

roundeye · Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2001 6:20 pm

those are really good ideas dude! i think ill try that. the second one at least cuz i cant model. thanx for your help.

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Dude · member Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2001 Posts: 144

You're welcome

and I just realized that I forgot to comment on the pic, and I don't know how I managed that because it's friggin' awesome, nice origional design, shading, yadayada I'm sure you've heard it all before, anyways it's kind of inspiring. Awesome job, especially for doing in secret aside from your job

sacrelicious · Posted: Thu Apr 05, 2001 11:57 pm

I too think this is great work, and that there's nothing really wrong with the foot.

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DiXter · Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2001 2:48 am

Awsome.. looks abit like Calista Flockhart goes scifi.. hehe
So cool!! good luck with the foot problem.

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trudel · Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2001 5:50 am

I can`t see nothing wrong really. In fact it`s very cool!

Epsilon · junior member Member # Joined: 15 Mar 2001 Posts: 4

I've colored most of this pic, just for the hell of it. If you give me a proper e-mail address i'll mail you the results.

- Eps

Ian · Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2001 12:47 am

cute

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RRoam · Posted: Sat Apr 07, 2001 6:07 am

ahhh.... very nice

roundeye · Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2001 10:40 am

really epsilon??? thats wikkid, did u fix the foot? its [email protected] i swear! i you want an address i can set up [email protected]. heh heh MAIL IT TO ME I WANNA SEE IT ALLREADY!

cute... bleh.

roundeye · Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2001 10:27 am

just an update. i think i fixed it, any more constructive comments, please feel free to add them... thanx for your help...

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Holly Jolly · Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2001 10:43 am

How did you change that around? Did you use a light table? That drawing is awesome, it was good before, and it looks even better now, why, because you just added more detail. Seriously, stop being so picky!

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roundeye · Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2001 10:58 am

sorry for being picky. i think im done, and can stop bothering you all and finish it

its changed a lot, in structure, not detail.... i brought the whole foot down, the heal down, made the toe more narrow and changed all the contours.
no light table, its on the computer.

Mike · Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2001 9:18 pm

Wow! you said you did this in the computer. it's really cool. i have nothing to complain about. what program are you using to do it?

sacrelicious · Posted: Mon Apr 09, 2001 10:40 pm

Yeah, do tell! I could've sworn this was straight pencil and paper.

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Dude · member Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2001 Posts: 144

Much better! That's exactly what I was thinking to do with the foot, even did a quick redraw which looks pretty close structure-wise to yours didn't finish it though anyways looks awesome...!

roundeye · Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2001 6:04 am

nah its all photoshop. mostly airbrush and brush set to 3 with opacity and size set to stylus... ill add what little i scanned when i get to work. heres the finished peice...
[edit]heres the untouched re-scan of the pencils. im so lazy i only drew one eye haha

and yea its done burnout. ill stop

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trudel · Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2001 6:32 am

i`ll say it again: Verrry well done. nice work

burn0ut · Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2001 7:13 am

wow that turned out(or turning out, are you done with it ?) very good!!
doesnt even look very digital at all, i love that!!

Epsilon · junior member Member # Joined: 15 Mar 2001 Posts: 4

erm, sorry mate, I deleted it :P no worries though, i'll go back and color the finished version. The version i did was mostly blue/red, any specfic colors in mind?

Just a small side note: the way you have that strap going across her chest, makes it look like she has a bare mid-section, and has no pants on. And I did make that mistake the first time I colored it

hehe.

roundeye · Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2001 12:21 am

bahaha really? too funny! she dosent have pants on! body suit, ends at hips. all i know is the crosses are red and the metal is painted white. medic/nurse style.
if you painted this or anyone for that matter, i would be eternally gratefull. (i cant paint to save my life)