[the_monkey]

i did this when i was sick.
i suck at drawing girls, and i suck at inking. it'll be colored soon.

crit all you like, color all you like. oh yeah, an can anyone tell me how quick this server is? i have cable, but id like to know how long it takes for a 56ker. thanks!

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Maho: the online Comic

tradgedy is when i cut my finger.
comedy is when i fall down a manhole and die.

[This message has been edited by the_monkey (edited April 08, 2001).]

[the_monkey]

yup, im gonna color it, then add some poetry stuff...

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Maho: the online Comic

tradgedy is when i cut my finger.
comedy is when i fall down a manhole and die.

[Visionary]

I'm a big fan of the inking.
What I see is that you've spent a lot of time on expressions. Some time on landscapeing and not a lot of time working with geometric structred objects. My two favorite images are the top right and bottom left. Why do you think that is? They scream great facial expressions from an interesting angle.
I highly recommend a ruler to help you out with some of your line work.
I really like what I see. Keep us posted on the coloring

-Visionary

[EviLToYLeT]

Really looking great. It tells a story alright. From what I see, the soilder is about to die and he looks at the destruction on his city and then flash backs to his family right and he's ognna start to cry/die? Dunno what else to say

[Holly Jolly]

Nice. You guys do so much detail! I do funny comics about video games. But you guys would laugh at them, oh wait, I guess that's a good thing.

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Uhhhhh...hi

[the_monkey]

holly jolly do u have a site for that comic?

[the_monkey]

sorry dbl post

[This message has been edited by the_monkey (edited April 09, 2001).]