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canistr
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 Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 7:30 pm |
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i'm working on this pic right now and thought that i'd like to get some suggestions on anatomy. i know her right hand is scrabbled, so please offer some crits. i'm coloring it now. hopefully i'll work out the problems as i go.
here's what i've got so far:
[This message has been edited by canistr (edited March 22, 2001).] |
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Snakebyte
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| Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 9:54 pm |
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| Hum� the sketch looks fine but the rendered head has a Cro-Magnon look to it�perhaps easing on the shadows around the eye�s may help. Otherwise it looks good! |
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burn0ut
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| Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2001 10:33 pm |
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hehe yea lighten the shadow above the nose, or get rid of it alltogether, because the face is so stylized, it looks alot wierder getting the right shadows for the facial structure or something...
yea that shadow above the nose kills it.
I like how snakebyte put it, Cro-Magnon look :P
But the sketch looks kick ass, try and get the painting to have the same rythm to it and it will rock  |
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