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Frozen Consciousness
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 Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 1:42 pm |
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...or an attempt anyway.
Straight out of the sketchbook so no colour/lineart or anything yet.
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Curi0us_George
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| Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2001 9:11 pm |
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| They look nice. I can't say much, since I'm not really 'in-the-know' about this style. You might want darker lines, though. You may need a softer pencil. |
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piter
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| Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2001 9:04 am |
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| This is a nice start, F.C.. I would suggest the following: 1) increase the size of the girl's hands and give them more definition, 2) rework the shape of the guy's head, since it's a bit skewed towards the upper-right, and 3) try to be more commital about your lines. This has a lot of potential, and I encourage you to keep plugging away at it. Good work! |
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the_monkey
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| Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2001 1:28 pm |
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doesnt manga mean comic in japanese?
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tradgedy is when i cut my finger.
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Frozen Consciousness
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| Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2001 2:10 pm |
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Yep...
and Hentai means "perverted"...
...Explains alot...
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Frozen Consciousness
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| Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2001 4:20 pm |
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*Yawn* Midnight appears again...
Here's the cleaned/coloured version of the sketch. I tried to sort out the "Skewed" head problem. But I haven't re-done her hands. That's why I'm posting it here rather than the "Gallery" section.
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