[MeRE]

what you guys think? am still touching it up into a more detail one...

[Awetopsy]

interesting.

I dont really have any crits because I dont know exactly what you are trying to accomplish with the picture.

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Freeze, This is a holdup!! Give me all your Talent!!!

[MeRE]

well...i try to paint my old sketch tho...
i just need input on how to make the building's wall more detail.
how abt the lighting,,the clouds..and overall?

[MeRE]

well...gimme suggestion pls...

[the_monkey]

i think its really cool, it dosent really need the detail cuz i like it bland. The background is cool, and the shading between buildings looks swuit.

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Maho: the online Comic

tradgedy is when i cut my finger.
comedy is when i fall down a manhole and die.

[Fontainne]

A simple problem I can't tell very well where the ground plane starts and the building ends (as the gradients tones are the same color)

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TreeHouse Animation

Sunshine dripping off my blade like a blood streaked violent stain.

[andskj]

I like it very much. I think if u devote some time to the coluds, and make them a little bit more detailed, and add some kinde of line next to the house, so we can see where the ground meet the hous.

Just my suggestions, but I think it looks good now!

[Wiked Ewok]

Well, I think had great line art to start with. The coloring seems bland, but that's a style. I like it.