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JeanJean · Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2001 8:53 am

After 20 hours of class in 3dsMax, and 4 hours of work (too much time for the result, I know). This is not the real textures I will use, these are from the 3DsMax library.

tell me what you think!!!!

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kaosAD · Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2001 8:59 am

no image......

JeanJean · Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2001 9:17 am

geocities sucks.....!!!.....really
http://www.geocities.com/jeanjean18/sijun001.jpg
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JeanJean · Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2001 9:23 am

fucking geocities...!!!!!!!!
http://www.geocities.com/jeanjean18/sijunboards.html

JeanJean · Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2001 9:24 am

aaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrggggggghhhhhh!!!!!!

fucking shit!!!!

I will replace it tonight

natec · Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2001 11:43 am

Not a bad job.

Bevel the edges of the door object, they're too sharp right now. There also seems to be a gap in the wall above the door.

Some of the edges of the mirror could use beveling as well. And whats the black reflected in the miror?? Is that where the geometry ends...thats what I'd think, but there seems to be a shadow at the edge...

When you get to texturing...make the black on the lamp not so black...what I mean is it almost only looks like a silhouette right now. It needs some more specularity, or change the lights...

-n

Wyatt Turner · Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2001 3:27 pm

Does this help the URL

It's all in the Properties!

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shardik · Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2001 1:09 pm

whatd u do wyatt?

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Andy`Ba · member Member # Joined: 20 Jan 2001 Posts: 98

Try making all details more subtile.
The bevels on the door and mirror for example.

When you get to texturing... add some dirt to corners and concave
surfaces, and put some scratches on all the textures.

Try putting more lights in the place of main light source to emulate the
effect of area light. You can also rotate the group of lights
around their direction axis and apply some motion blur, this will give
the effect of real area light.

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Andy`Ba · member Member # Joined: 20 Jan 2001 Posts: 98

I noticed that some proportions are a bit wrong.
You can think of every max unit as a centimeter or a inch in real life -
in this way it is easier to compare the scene to real life proportions.

Good luck!!

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edible snowman · member Member # Joined: 12 Sep 2000 Posts: 998

I don't know if you have time for this, but I would look a lot more realistic with some stuff on the floor. I have never seen a spotless floor in my life. Also, the lamp would look much cooler if it was turned on.