[TheNexx]

There are a lot of thing wrong with this pic, but Im mainly concern with anatomy and shading of the body, any crits would be usefull


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[SporQ]

overall, the anatomy is very good. i like the lighting as well. the face seems a little "off" sorta looks like it is the wrong angle compared to the whole head, hard to put my finger on it. i would suggest doing the head up from basic shapes first. good job though

i didnt think she had any ta-ta's in that movie

SporQ

[nightmare]

she didn't have boobs in that movie, no.
i think her face looks a little off cuz it seems like her chin is jutting out a lot, and it forms almost a sharp right angle.

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[LordArioch]

Looks familiar....



From Kerorin's gallery:
http://www.linkclub.or.jp/~kerorin/kero/kero.html

[TheNexx]

Nothing strange, we used photo as a reference, it a shot forom the movie

I know she didn't But without those she looked like a boy


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Dennis Sedov

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[LordArioch]

[TheNexx]

Exept that image is inverted
Honestly I don't see anything bad to look at reference when you paint.

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[Pat]

Not surprisingly, the Professional was a *BIG* success in Japan. It came out during the height of the so called "Lolicom" resurgence (short for Lolita Complex) and had a major impact on many artists over there. It seems Japanese men are facinated by the older man/younger woman relationship. I won't go into the strange social forces which mold this predeliction, but suffice to say it's not at all unusual to see Japanese artists borrowing visuals from their favorite movies.

-Pat

[TheNexx]

I've updated that pic addad some ditails, and redrew face completely.

Just since we having this conversation this is a pic I used as a reference:


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Dennis Sedov

[Nex]

looks like a good start to me up there.
its quite spooky how you improved after the first pics you posted.

I'm waiting for the final version then

[faustgfx]

*blink*

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[Painted Melody]

Ah.. another reference debate looming?

Well I also don't see anything wrong -- I know Spooge and a few other greats have paused DVD movies and drew from the stills.

(If it's on thernodizing - that's another issue altogether....)

~PM

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[faustgfx]

but she's pretty nowadays so it can't be bad.. :|



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[Awetopsy]

who cares if you used a reference.

anyways you pic is nice overall but Ill say this. her thighs are too long and her calves are too short.. bring her thighs closer to her chest and pull the left shoulder (her right) back a bit. Kinda looks like shes lunging it forward..



great job so far tho!!!

[edit] try that.
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[TheNexx]

Unfortunatly I were not able to see this pic that you've posted, but thanks for adivese anyways

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[Awetopsy]

heh fixed it. bumping the thread up so you can see it.

[TheNexx]

thanks!

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