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TheNexx
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OK, this is my second painting ever. (Keyword is painting, As you can see on my wesite its more as I don't know how to call that, but its not painting) Well I need hard critique, because I don't know what to do next, I can add some ditails but... And , BTW, some hints on how to draw mountains would be appreciated
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SporQ
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| Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 1:22 am |
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wow, thats awesome. i really like the scale and the colors used, cept the green may be a bit too saturated. :/
oh, and i dont think that truck is gonna fit in the tunnel 
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CrakBEENie
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| Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 1:47 pm |
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| second painting ever !! wow...i dont think you should put anything at the end of the canyon, it makes the bridge stand out nicely, maybe some clouds up high or somethin, but i like the contrast with the bridge and truck against the light at the end of the canyon... and what , is that a guy hangin off the bridge by a rope??? |
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Budoka
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| Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 2:23 pm |
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Like the concept, looks as if it could end up very kinda atmospheric. If I were you I would firstly think about a hazy fog in the canyon and also think of removing some of the details, it looks too bitty with all the intricate little things.
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TheNexx
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| Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2001 10:28 pm |
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What about montain textrure? How can I improve it?
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TheNexx
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| Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 12:30 am |
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At least someone sow a truck I know I have to make that tonnel bigger. I'm hoping to add a huge city to that empty area in mountains though.
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jeffery
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| Posted: Mon Feb 12, 2001 11:24 am |
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i don't think the texture closer to the center of the picture (ie. the cliffs that are farther away) needs to be improved, cuz with distance you lose detail.. why not just download some pictures of cliffs with different kinds of rockfaces and see how they look? there are lots of different ways to go.. square patches of rock, piles of shale, or even the horizontal bands of stone you see in pictures of the grand canyon.
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